Alright technique, no direction
The drum programming is pretty good. But a lack of attention to detail (clipping/distortion) shows the composers rough edges still. The piece overall had a lack of interesting shape. No real thematic development. Just 4-5 parts that come in or out. I suppose this is a common problem with a lot of house and trance, but in a track like this (IE: not meant for drunken grinding in a club) there needs to be more depth in order to grab and hold the audience.